Monday, December 12, 2011

Grammar by Students

No Quick Write today.
Monday.
  1. He destroyed his house and set it on fire, only taking $24.50 and his bank account number with him:he was on his way to starting a new life.
  2. Caspian looked at me in such a sorrowful way that almost made me cry for him, but it was too late; I was already crying for myself.
  3. The second day, they tried putting mini rockets on his wheelchair making him crash into 2 unicorns.
  4. Home. Can you really call a place you've been living in for a month and a half, a home?
  5. Peyton walked through the dark alley, her schoolbag clinging to her shoulders like tape.
  6. After he had destroyed the snow machine that had developed a mind of its own, he was bankrupt on good inventions